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Journal Entry: Thu Nov 13, 2014, 4:38 AM
  • Mood: Daily Needs
  • Listening to: Mr. Enter's Arnold Betrays Iggy review
  • Reading: What I'm writing right now
  • Watching: My computer monitor
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Why would I be eating?! I'm on the computer!
  • Drinking: Why would I be drinking?! I'm on the computer
Hey guys. Surprised to see another journal from me again so soon?

Well...I have a problem. You know my new story "Heroes of Mobius: Aftershock"? Well...I'm beginning to think that I made a major whoopsie with it.

The plot of the story is Enerjak is back as a ghost and wants to reek havoc on Mobius and also make a major comeback. Sounds fine and dandy I know but then I decided to put some new villains in there, a group called S.T.I.N.G. who worship Eggman's way of life. And that's the whoopsie.

I can't for the life of me decide how the rest of the plot should play out. I'm having trouble getting the new villains to fit into the plot and actually be a part of it as opposed to just being there for the sake of it. I fear greatly that S.T.I.N.G. is coming off as a useless subplot. I really am thinking right about now that putting them into the plot was a big mistake. Cause now, in a way, everything's fallen apart...:(

It also doesn't help how I didn't even plan out the story and just wrote the first chapter and decided to improvise from there...stupid Scott...

So if anybody gives a damn about the story, can you PLEASE help me out here? Have you got any ideas on how I can make S.T.I.N.G. fit into the plot or should I scrap the entire thing and start all over again? Because unless I can get S.T.I.N.G. to fit into the plot, I'm going to have to start over...

And now for something completely different:

I shall be starting Freedom Planet: The Christmas Raid this Saturday. But don't expect to read it yet. I won't upload any completed chapters until December comes.

As for Blaze: Princess of the Sol Islands, it's going on well. :) Me and Erin are working hard on the series and we hope you enjoy all the other episodes. :D

And I still have requests to upload but don't worry, they will be uploaded soon.

UPDATE: I've made my decision. I am scrapping Heroes of Mobius: Aftershock and re-writing everything after Chapter 1. S.T.I.N.G. will not be in it this time. 

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Hey there Deviants! I am Mixedfan8643 and I love to draw, make pictures on Photoshop and write fanfiction! I hope you enjoy the stuff I upload to this site and if you have a problem about it...please be civil. I only accept CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

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DarkCatTheKhajjit Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Student Digital Artist
Good morning :)
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Mixedfan8643 Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Hobbyist Filmographer
Good morning. :)
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DarkCatTheKhajjit Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Student Digital Artist
Hi :)

How are you?
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Mixedfan8643 Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Hobbyist Filmographer
Fine thank you. :)
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TCH2 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Did you know that a Frozen short comes out next year?
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Mixedfan8643 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yes I did. 
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TCH2 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Your thoughts on the matter?
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Mixedfan8643 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's a Frozen short. Instant-watch. :D 
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mastergamer20 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Good morning Scott. :)

Tomorrow will be my 2 year anniversary on my new DA page. :)
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